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nycboot
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
6/19/20, 1:34 AM
What an awesome story!
6/19/20, 1:30 AM
Enjoy the unique deceptive ploys in sending the reader along with the character
Nex Fan
6/19/20, 1:04 AM
my problem with your story is the fact that it feels unoriginal. the idea of the personality change via name change works well but it feels like youve straight up just took it from KNT frat which is disappointing because Nex's story is so good and i just feel like im reading a spin off. try drawing from more originality because it just seems too similar.
Anonymous
6/19/20, 12:13 AM
Seriously... This should be a movie!
Anonymous
6/19/20, 12:11 AM
OK, so... Naughty naughty for submitting an eight year old story... But you're forgiven because it was FUCKING FANTASTIC! Loved it! 💖
6/18/20, 11:39 PM
Love this concept, can't wait to see what comes next
Slave Abdamelek
6/18/20, 10:59 PM
nycboot, why do you love it? :) I know things are a little slow as the stage is set for the next epic battle, but it'll pay off!
6/18/20, 10:29 PM
I would like to see more of the Coin Later, like turning a bunch of guys into gay cowboys
Anonymous
6/18/20, 10:02 PM
awesome work! thanks :)