Recent Comments

6/17/20, 3:51 PM
Just love this story so much I like to get the feeling that you really care for their relationship and I love reading something with a deeper meaning and effort. Really good writing. Keep up the good work!!!
May 17, 2020
6/17/20, 3:35 PM
Amazing! I'd love a follow up to this one about the further Zoom meetings as well as what the one guy or gal said what happens when the pandemic lifts. Or even a prequel to show how it all started.
Jun 16, 2020
6/17/20, 3:31 PM
thank you
Ng5hvlo4
6/17/20, 11:21 AM
I am enjoying the setup you are going for, kinda like cooking a really tasty meal and knowing it will take some time to prepare to perfection. The technology snare of the TVs in the bathroom was genius and I look forward to seeing how this develops. The writing is clear and the breaks are good for going back and forth with POV. I too enjoy tech-based control, as per my own series on the matter.
Jake
6/17/20, 8:14 AM
This is by far my favorite story on here! I come back to it so often and every time it's just as good as the first.
Anonymous
6/17/20, 7:53 AM
Hope you continue, but if you would rather start a new series or something, I don't mind
6/17/20, 7:48 AM
I really like the plot, and the twist was great. I hope you continue the story, and maybe put forward some superhero stuff, your profile pix looks like that’s your interest too.
6/17/20, 7:37 AM
The idea of this story could be really hot, but it’s broken by the grammar and spelling. Men with no hair on their heads area bald, they can be bold, while bald headed.
6/17/20, 6:45 AM
I love this chapter even more than the last one, I thought it was insanely hot too! You're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more.
6/17/20, 5:25 AM
Awesome! I hope there is more!