Interesting and fun set up. Honestly a part of me was like "hmm, I wonder if there is someone else controlling things" but then when it didn't seem that way I let it go, till you revealed the 'twist'. Oh to be that master, with his fun stable of boys. That said, honestly, where was the rimming? I mean I didn't really see it.

Very hoooot... I love this kind of humiliation, especially when the doc was later aware of it.

Hi everyone! I know I normally write my responses as notes during my updates, but I thought I might get in touch through here for once I'm very appreciative of your continued interest in this story! I never expected it to go on for this long, and I definitely have your comments, ratings and continued enthusiasm to thank. This is the first story I've ever written so unfortunately my pace isn't particularly consistent! @Evelded - I'm glad the tickling / laughter is to your liking. I actually remember an earlier comment from you that prompted the inclusion of that in this chapter, so thank you! @Plymouth58 - thanks for being so understanding and for your continued comments! I love how specific you get with the praise, and it's really helpful with developing plot points. @NZDom - love that you're enjoying the story still! And thanks for noticing my profile picture - I thought it was fitting for where this story is going @ForgottenCradle - for sure! I remember one of your earlier comments about enslaving the whole police force. Hopefully the pacing isn't too disappointing, but we're definitely getting there. I'm trying to think of a way to get the chief involved sooner rather than later @MuscleFlex - yay I'm glad you enjoyed that! I see that element pop up a lot in hypnosis videos, so I thought I would incorporate a bit of that - but I'm not sure if I'm being descriptive enough. The bottom bodybuilder cop scene was pretty fun to write! @Anons - obliviousness is one of my favourite elements of hypnosis, and I love getting comments where people bring it up (especially if they reference specific scenes or thought patterns) so I'm grateful that you guys wrote in! Also, Tkhon's story is one of my favourites on this site! I'm definitely nowhere near that level though, but it's something to aspire to for sure! Also also, wow, I've got to say, I never thought of going that far with the names... I wonder if there's someone the punk can rope in with advanced clearance to change any official records ;) And to the last anon before this comment - I appreciate your lovely message for sure, and to be honest, it spurred me to write a bit more to the story (and also made me write this reply in the process haha). You're not being pushy at all and I love how you refer to this as Humpme's misadventures! I'll probably get something out by the end of the week if I'm lucky, but no promises :)

more pls! and add picssss

I never expected to see a mtg fanfic here, good job :)

Looking forward to the next installment

go go go!

Louis. yes. blufdude@aol.com

it was a hottt story, you should totally do a sequel.

keep it up. I agree the flesh cock cage is a new one