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6/16/20, 8:42 AM
I wish someone would have continued Path 1. I preferred the 'just wanted to be made love to' Sam yo the 'master Sam'.
boi98229
6/16/20, 8:23 AM
Love your stories! You do a great job of describing the seduction in such a delicious way. My biggest lament is that the story is limited to one chapter. Do you write longer stories?
6/16/20, 8:21 AM
Fuck yeah, can't wait for the rest.
6/16/20, 7:47 AM
Daddy Kent's son has protected him from harm. I enjoyed the method used for discovering Michael's trigger. I agree with all the comments addressing the cross dressing of any of the characters, leave them as masculine as they are. I look forward to the sequel. As I stated before, the uncle seems not sloppy but unscrupulous: that he would have Michael call him immediately after someone offers him a drink does not consider such factors as time, place, circumstances. At least he could have had Michael walk to a location in which he knows he is alone. I wait with bated breath Phil showing Roger how he uses his daddy cock.
boi98229
6/16/20, 7:36 AM
Good first effort! Another chapter or two and you might become bisexual! Very good premise for a story! It seems like much of the technology for this system might exist by now. Maybe you should work out the details of this system and market it on eBay. i would definitely give it a try! ;) The real possibility helped to make the story seem relatable. The basic plot was good, I thought, but there wasn't enough detail to really get lost in the process, the characters, and their developing relationship. It was good (if a little bare bones) base to start a longer story. Is that the plan?
6/16/20, 7:16 AM
I thought this was a really well done story. The framing of his internal struggle against the late reveal that he had latent suggestions he was bound to worked real nicely, and I think you've done a good job of making the antagonist manipulative without being sadistic.
6/16/20, 6:53 AM
this could definitely become an amazing series! hope you continue it!
6/16/20, 4:03 AM
This is turning into a great story. I can't wait to see how the whole school handles the fact. That the big alpha jock is 1)gay & 2) in love with a smart "nerdy" kids. Only time will tell I guess.
Anonymous
6/16/20, 3:20 AM
I enjoyed this series! Nice plot twist!
Anonymous
6/16/20, 3:19 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!