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boi98229
6/16/20, 7:36 AM
Good first effort! Another chapter or two and you might become bisexual! Very good premise for a story! It seems like much of the technology for this system might exist by now. Maybe you should work out the details of this system and market it on eBay. i would definitely give it a try! ;) The real possibility helped to make the story seem relatable. The basic plot was good, I thought, but there wasn't enough detail to really get lost in the process, the characters, and their developing relationship. It was good (if a little bare bones) base to start a longer story. Is that the plan?
6/16/20, 7:16 AM
I thought this was a really well done story. The framing of his internal struggle against the late reveal that he had latent suggestions he was bound to worked real nicely, and I think you've done a good job of making the antagonist manipulative without being sadistic.
6/16/20, 6:53 AM
this could definitely become an amazing series! hope you continue it!
6/16/20, 4:03 AM
This is turning into a great story. I can't wait to see how the whole school handles the fact. That the big alpha jock is 1)gay & 2) in love with a smart "nerdy" kids. Only time will tell I guess.
Anonymous
6/16/20, 3:20 AM
I enjoyed this series! Nice plot twist!
Anonymous
6/16/20, 3:19 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Omar
6/16/20, 3:02 AM
So fucking hot!! Just please leave the feminine-cosplay alone. That is a big turn off. Why not make these hunky lawyers his obedient butlers instead? Love seeing this young master in control!! <3
6/16/20, 1:23 AM
I definitely like this leg of the story and Darius presenting Jason with a choice. It's a very nice twist in the story and really adds an emotional tension to the story. A very enjoyable read and adds anticipation for the next parts of the story.
Anonymous
6/16/20, 1:16 AM
Hi! Any idea when we'll see the next chapter? I don't want to be pushy, but I would like to keep reading officer Humpme's misadventures! Maybe is because I get used to your fast updates, but the waiting seem forever!
6/16/20, 12:22 AM
Interesting start. Not a fan of the intentional humiliation but the sex act was hot. I would like him using his powers on say a club full of homophobic guys. Hehe