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6/15/20, 8:31 AM
looking forward for more ! please continue.
Anonymous
6/15/20, 8:27 AM
i don't know why, but i get the feeling his neighbor is a werewolf hunter
Louis
6/15/20, 7:45 AM
Hey, wanna create a new story together?
Anonymous
6/15/20, 7:45 AM
Badly needs more chapters. Then again, this one is excellent for an introduction.
Louis
6/15/20, 7:44 AM
Hey, wanna create a new story together?
6/15/20, 6:20 AM
This was a great start but it felt like you cut the story short at the end. You did so well on the lead up but once he was there, its like you rushed to finish
6/15/20, 5:31 AM
Super hot, I loved how raunchy this story was! The slow mind control from the various intoxicating man scents was awesome to read. I'm excited to see what will happen to the other guys and what more raunchy fun is in store.
6/15/20, 5:13 AM
Damn, I really enjoyed reading this! I was curious as to the direction you'd go after the first chapter but I really like the end product. I think the whole concept behind this story and the addition of Jai becoming a cum fountain creates a fantasy that is fun to envision. I'm intrigued how the other guys will be incorporated in the other chapters now. Awesome work man :)
Anonymous
6/15/20, 1:02 AM
How about some body modifications?Great start
6/15/20, 12:54 AM
Great start! Novel concept! Looking forward to future chapters!