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7/7/20, 3:17 PM
Yeah, the son-switch stuff was a really interesting idea that didn't quite work for me. I feel like it either needed to be nicer--maybe the boys could just suddenly believe they had two dads--or meaner, really lingering on the fact that Master Mike has essentially erased a lifelong father-son bond.
7/7/20, 3:06 PM
Loved every bit of this story!!
Anonymous
7/7/20, 2:59 PM
When you google 'supernatural defined', the first entry that appears is from the Oxford Dictionary. It reads "adjective (of a manifestation or event) attributed to some force beyond scientific understanding or the laws of nature. "a supernatural being" It then says 'Similar'. This is the first word that follows: paranormal.
7/7/20, 2:54 PM
I love the rimming material and the general nature of events. That said the change in who is whose son is actually something I found myself super disliking, to a point that I didn't even realize how much such a thing would bother me. So I sort of skipped those paragraphs for the rest of the chapter that was pretty sexy.
7/7/20, 2:51 PM
This chapter, like the entire series, definitely pushes my buttons. I especially liked the conversion of Todd as Master Mike's new son. Thanks for continuing the series.
7/7/20, 2:11 PM
Good story, but I would have liked to see more of Hunter's transformation. But it was a really great story :D
7/7/20, 1:41 PM
I've got no problem with the story, which I thought was a hot and fun bite-size piece of erotica. But I do think the contest needed to provide a clearer definition of what a "Supernatural" story entails. To me, this story falls into the category of "weird fiction," which straddles the line between sci-fi and supernatural fantasy. Some details, like the mountain opening up and men being entranced by incantations in a strange language, are more typical of the supernatural fantasy genre; however, we also get details about the biology of these cum-eating alien parasites, which takes us into the realm of sci-fi.
7/7/20, 1:30 PM
😭😭😭 I want a big buff boyfriend that I can casually jerk off,too. 😂😂😂 I love this story more than I thought I would. Kinda sad thats it's over soon
EntrancedGay92
7/7/20, 1:03 PM
Once again I am stepping in because it seems Conversion and New Guy don't know how to open a dictionary. Supernatual is defined as "(of a manifestation or event) attributed to some force beyond scientific understanding or the laws of nature". I don't see any mention of anything remotely related to hell on earth. Educate yourself before you speak. I swear the men in this community are becoming more and more unbearable each day.
LthrBikerThug
7/7/20, 12:37 PM
This was a great story and very hot but I feel I have to mention the transformation of Hunter was rushed rather badly. I would have liked to see what caused the full transformation and a true description of Daddy Hunt as well. Overall still a really nice story though and I look forward to your future works!