Recent Comments

6/14/20, 4:09 PM
Really creative story from what we've seen so far, and everything is so nice!!! One of my favorite!
6/14/20, 4:05 PM
Great second chapter! I love the slow progression. I can really identify with Atlas's (Ace's?) feelings of loneliness and fear of rejection. If only I had met some guys like this when I was in college! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:44 PM
I really hope you keep going with this series! So F'ing HOT!!
6/14/20, 3:19 PM
Your phrasology is wonderful. The one sentence: "I In an experience completely novel to him, Atlas let go of all preconceived notions and worries and just… existed, buoyed comfortably by a feeling of connection to the guys around him". is a wonderful summation of his conflict and resolution. wonderful!
Feb 11, 2019
6/14/20, 3:14 PM
Very well written. It is refreshing to have a more literary writer on this site. The person who made the thesaurus comment should work to improve his vocabulary. I don't see any words that are uncommon or inappropriately used in this story.
6/14/20, 3:06 PM
What an exceptional story. Selfishly saying, It could be a bit longer. The complexity of feelings on both parts could make for a chapter of it's own. And I love the first line. If ever there were an Ayn Rand sequel, it should be named "Atlas Sighed".
Jun 14, 2020
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:03 PM
Really hot, loved the pictures for all of them Keep up the great work! <3
6/14/20, 2:38 PM
Love how the story is progressing. Can't wait to see where you'll take this next.
Thom
6/14/20, 12:30 PM
This is very wholesome. I love wholesome cx
6/14/20, 12:09 PM
Oh, thats going to be a factor :)