Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:17 PM
very hot continuation! you switched tenses and from I to you a couple times, just keep an eye out for that. I'm loving the transformations and rewriting of poor Tommy's life, though!
Jun 14, 2020
6/14/20, 7:44 PM
Very hot. More please
6/14/20, 7:07 PM
this is getting much better! thanks so much for posting. i've pretty much logged in to this site just to read more and more chapters from you. thank you, and please keep up the good work!
6/14/20, 4:09 PM
Really creative story from what we've seen so far, and everything is so nice!!! One of my favorite!
6/14/20, 4:05 PM
Great second chapter! I love the slow progression. I can really identify with Atlas's (Ace's?) feelings of loneliness and fear of rejection. If only I had met some guys like this when I was in college! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:44 PM
I really hope you keep going with this series! So F'ing HOT!!
6/14/20, 3:19 PM
Your phrasology is wonderful. The one sentence: "I In an experience completely novel to him, Atlas let go of all preconceived notions and worries and just… existed, buoyed comfortably by a feeling of connection to the guys around him". is a wonderful summation of his conflict and resolution. wonderful!
Feb 11, 2019
6/14/20, 3:14 PM
Very well written. It is refreshing to have a more literary writer on this site. The person who made the thesaurus comment should work to improve his vocabulary. I don't see any words that are uncommon or inappropriately used in this story.
6/14/20, 3:06 PM
What an exceptional story. Selfishly saying, It could be a bit longer. The complexity of feelings on both parts could make for a chapter of it's own. And I love the first line. If ever there were an Ayn Rand sequel, it should be named "Atlas Sighed".
Jun 14, 2020
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:03 PM
Really hot, loved the pictures for all of them Keep up the great work! <3