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6/13/20, 10:29 PM
Wow, that was amazingly raunchy and so damn hot! All i can say is I can't wait to read more and to see just how dirty and raunchy you can get!!
6/13/20, 10:13 PM
Fuck, that's so hot!!! The slow build of those dreams teaching him how to suck cock ending in him finally getting it down his throat in reality!!! Soooo fucking good and I would love a part two where he can't stop himself from being fucked!
6/13/20, 8:11 PM
Piney's getting real good at controlling the coaches. I hope we get to see more of Geoff,too. He joined voluntarily,but he needs to be inducted,still
Jun 11, 2020
Anonymous
6/13/20, 8:09 PM
Oh wow. I've played with some GPT things before, but this tool...is going to give me many hours of fun exploration. Thank you. You are officially a porn pioneer, expanding brave new technologies into our kinkzone :p
6/13/20, 6:42 PM
I'm glad Ricky finally gets past all the guilt/self-doubt stuff, but I'd love to see more of the non-sexual side of this story again. The hero worship and naked admiration, the workouts, the desire to be as big as his big bro. The way Truck makes Ricky feel safe and protected, his desire for Truck's approval and the way he looks to him for guidance. His absolute trust. The things I wish I'd gotten from my big bros growing up, that had nothing to do with sex. Don't get me wrong, I'm fucking loving the sex parts! But you could really make this into my all time favorite story if you get back to paying attention to some of the seeds you planted in Chapter One.
6/13/20, 6:31 PM
That certain little bro is one lucky fucker! This story is the hottest thing I've read in a good long while! Craving more, big bro.
EJG
6/13/20, 5:51 PM
Daddy Pietro's not gonna be too happy his little sluts been playing around with all these Alphas
6/13/20, 5:40 PM
Phew, thanks! I literally haven't done any creative writing since 2002, and never erotica. But as an avid consumer of smutty fiction over the years, I guess I internalized a lot of the dos and don'ts :) TBH, I originally wanted to write something just based on the gotta get fucked/can't cum/ball growth thing, but needed something a little extra for it to make sense on this particular website. Your Truth or Dare idea seemed like a great entry point, and now I'm going to have to figure out how to flesh out the other characters and give them meaningful stuff to do while still centering it around Fareed and his experience.
6/13/20, 5:06 PM
Awesome and amazing, I loved that chapter, you have nothing to be worried about with your writing, that was great! I liked how you changed who was giving out the questions. Can't wait to see what you have to come.
Anonymous
6/13/20, 4:13 PM
This is getting hotter with every chapter. I'm loving this series.