Recent Comments

EJG
6/13/20, 1:31 PM
'Happily Married' or not, in the realms of pure fantasy,i can't see why the bad boys can't win for a while,and even the most innocent of victims fail. It's hot for me at least,the fantasies of being used by str8 guys. I have not enjoyed a(n opening chapter?) story,since i enjoyed HavenTesla's New Years Eve,and that poor (str8 & originally homophobic) fella had a whole year of being abused by str8 guys as well as gay.
Berlinberfysub
6/13/20, 1:28 PM
Love the beginning! Hope there's a lot more to come! Nothing is better than a good demon corruption/transformation story!
6/13/20, 12:47 PM
I love big macho alpha guys turning into bottom bitches. (not the biggest fan of lace and cross dressing but the rest is hot enough to not turn me off)
6/13/20, 7:33 AM
What a HOT start. I hope to see more real soon. Love me some demon corruption/hypno slave work.
Lusty Stallion
6/13/20, 7:30 AM
Sammcub89 - who knows what's in store? Has it got a bit too 'wholesome for you'? Lol - read the forums to see what I'm referring to. Keep reading and you might find I've already granted your wish...maybe
6/13/20, 7:09 AM
Excellent premise, I like the progression and openness to future changes. Cannot wait to read more.
6/13/20, 6:58 AM
Yaaaaaay, a new update! Can't wait to see what happens with Michael. This was a great chapter.
6/13/20, 6:56 AM
thanks for writing something nice in this genre. its hot to read something fun that doesn't end badly. would love more from this universe!
6/13/20, 6:51 AM
Thanks for all the positive feedback! I am planning on writing a sequel but I'm not sure just yet if it'll be the next story though.
firesix
6/13/20, 4:44 AM
I can't help but agree with the anonymous commenter. The story is messy and unclear, and I think more effort was needed. However, there is potential, so don't quit. Just spend more time on your stories and think about the plot ahead of time, and you'll have perfectly good stuff.