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6/12/20, 5:49 AM
i want to read trucks side of the story too
6/12/20, 5:26 AM
Terrific work. Thanks for posting it.
6/12/20, 4:32 AM
Also, telling someone a truth doesn't extend past the game, unless its part of someone's truth, like saying that they will always believe what ever is told to them is the truth, no matter what it is, or what it might do or change. Other than that, do what you will!
Jun 11, 2020
Anonymous
6/12/20, 4:28 AM
I just tested it with an extended incest scenario. The pin function really helps keep it on track. And it seems like the longer you make the story, the more it adapts to your writing style and subject matter. Found myself rewriting and refreshing less as time went on. It's still a pretty even effort between you and the computer, though.
6/12/20, 3:26 AM
I need the next chapter asap!!! Can't wait to read it!
6/12/20, 3:25 AM
I appreciate how unpredictable and slippery this story is. I can’t wait to see how it surprises us next. No matter what, I’m sure it will be just as hot in future chapters as it was in this one.
6/12/20, 3:18 AM
This chapter is even hotter than the first! I love how you write dialogue. Looking forward to the next installment.
6/12/20, 3:07 AM
You're welcome! I've hoped someone would add to what I started, but it isn't always easy to place yourself in someone else's world. Sex scenes can be difficult, my advice is just to write the scene how you imagine it, you can add to it or edit it after, trust me it can take a few tries to get it to feel right and make sense, and that doesn't always work either. And basic rules for how the nanites in my setting work, which I think you already realized anyway, but, just saying something is true to someone won't work unless it's preceded by *Truth or Dare?* and that must be phrased as a question to that player. Though, until the next players turn a truth or dare can be added to for that player. Thats pretty much it, my intention with Truth or Dare was for the nanites to infect the world, therefor making reality alteration possible, but the populace oblivious to it. Anyway, awesome start, I really enjoyed this and really am looking forward to more! And good luck!
6/12/20, 2:50 AM
Thanks, guys! This is literally my first time writing fiction since I was in high school. And special thanks to you, NANOwriter, for creating the world this exists in. TBH, I'm kinda worried about introducing sex next scene. Making sure all the action is clear and makes sense. Wish me luck! (fingers crossed)