Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:24 PM
When chapter 2? 😭
Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:19 PM
The level of detail and immersion was intense at the start but it’s so perfect as a way of “journaling”. Really really enjoyed this start to the story. Definitely interested to read the horny way they physically changed but if that’s planned for far into the future that’s also fine, I really enjoyed your writing style and keen to see more!
7/4/25, 1:54 AM
I've had this series bookmarked for ages and it's a crime that I didn't read it sooner, this was SO good!! I really loved the worldbuilding and this checked a lot of my boxes. I'm excited to read the rest of the series!

7/4/25, 9:11 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Oh great! Well you know what they say, better late than never!
Mark
7/4/25, 7:35 PM
Loved this!

7/4/25, 7:37 PM
@Mark 👍
7/4/25, 3:51 PM
Nice one Cicero, very erotic!

7/4/25, 7:36 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Thanks
Anonymous
7/4/25, 6:31 PM
I can't wait to see how this keeps going. I'm loving it so far.
7/4/25, 5:26 PM
Hot story Bro

7/4/25, 5:34 PM
@[Chav lad](/user/show/2652549) thanks brother
7/4/25, 4:41 PM
I really hope you continue this story!
7/4/25, 2:53 PM
Great writing and level of detail with the characters. I was picturing the old Edgewater Beach Hotel in Chicago when I read your story.

7/4/25, 3:53 PM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Thank you so much! I will admit I have never been to Chicago so I love that you could visualise somewhere real based on my writing! Just googled the Edgewater Beach Hotel....that's actually pretty darn close to what was in my head!
7/4/25, 7:04 AM
This chapter should be included into here (don't know if was an error done on your part or you were just busy with posting other stories) - https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/35075?linear=false

7/4/25, 3:41 PM
@[4DaBoysOnly](/user/show/10040837) I've fixed this. Thx for noting this!