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6/11/20, 2:45 AM
I was waiting in dread for the betrayal that never actually happened, and I'm glad of it. That was an unexpectedly sweet, weird little exploration. I liked it a lot. Hope if it continues it retains the tone.
6/11/20, 1:48 AM
will we see part 3 soon?
Anonymous
6/11/20, 1:25 AM
Love it! Love the ending too where it hints to Dan becoming his big beary other half.
Martin
6/10/20, 9:16 PM
Really hot story!
Anonymous
6/10/20, 9:15 PM
So fucking HOT!!! I feel sorry for Brody but want to be him at the same time! Great writing and detail...
6/10/20, 8:51 PM
Hot as hell, and I love this twist on the mind control theme. Love it in general when guys are made to enjoy something they think they shouldn't enjoy. Thanks for posting!!
6/10/20, 8:42 PM
an excellent beginning, i'm looking forward to the doctor's verbal induction as well as the fuzzing over of the hero. the doctor's dialog seems like he'll either make the good captain either mentally young, dumb, or possibly both and no matter which i am SO down. i love giving a guy a good oral fixation, and I hope the good Doctor is a proper villain and not just an unscrupulous physician. the hero/villain power play will just add the cherry on top of what promises to be a new favorite series of mine.
RoboticXperiment03
6/10/20, 7:46 PM
An ideal future. I enjoy your dispassionate narrative style. It allows me to insert my high level of reaction to this experience and make it more personal for me.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/10/20, 4:50 PM
Very nicely done. I love idea of hypnosis, still have never been put under yet though. I would be willing to give your stories a quick look over if you need a second set of eyes for them.