Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:58 PM
Please continue,this series is a great.
6/10/20, 1:53 PM
Yeah there's definitely some more to come with these guys. It's a little subtle but there's already a difference in people who were gay before the nanites, and those who got turned by them. Not everyone can do what Ethan did in the last chapter :D Long-term, these guys are going to be like mitochondria - after all, they're "invisible" to the immune system (not that I have any idea how, I'm not an immunologist). I can confidently state we're not going Grey Goo on this one (at least, I'm not intending to take it there, but this is a community series). The nanites are designed to heal/protect/prolong mammalian biology, after all. By now they're basically tuned to human biology, but there's some interesting effects yet to come :D
Jul 17, 2005
6/10/20, 1:48 PM
this was the first erotic gay story I read, and it brought a lot of... ahem...pleasure. It's still a classic for me! thanks for the post!
6/10/20, 1:25 PM
well I suppose if I want to go in a different direction I can take advantage of the community function. But I was wondering about the fork that this would allow mainly that we could avoid the grey goo scenario in that he could make it so that the nanites are well neutered. The changes that are there will likely keep because while they may have been caused by microscopic organisms they are accepted now part of the larger organisms that they altered. Plus it allows you to say they're going to do something different turning people into living silver statues. Dream linking creating secondary personalities. Making them act like dogs and human skin. Preferring twink or otter as to honk or bear . I just like the idea of him getting to the point where he can start reprogramming himself or the effects of the nanites haven't gone mad scientist with the nanites having altered his head to always want to experiment with their full breath of abilities . but you're right that might be a chain for the theme and how things are doing so it's interesting to see how things play out
Martin
6/10/20, 12:12 PM
**Please stay civil.** That goes for both readers as well as the authors or their masters.
6/10/20, 7:17 AM
Listen whoever you are. If you have so many problems with this story then stop reading it. It is not meant for thankless persons like you. Readers who enjoy, read it and admire it commenting here and sending me emails. So you can leave and read other hundreds and thousands of stories. Stop being a sissy.
6/10/20, 4:49 AM
Intriguing start! Would like to see where this goes...
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:56 AM
Agree very much with the first comment. Great writing of self-debasement and obliviousness... not to mention the twist at the end with Captain.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 1:03 AM
Really hot! Would love to see more
6/10/20, 12:24 AM
At first, I didn't like that you introduced Leo into the story. Pine's jocked up male slave world was so perfect, I wanted nothing to mess it up. I like your point that you wanted to mix it up instead of just enslaving one guy to the next. That said, I really liked the Leo factor in this. It was hot and it was a bit dark too. You portrayed the sense of urgency well as Pine rushed for the registration form.