Recent Comments

6/10/20, 7:17 AM
Listen whoever you are. If you have so many problems with this story then stop reading it. It is not meant for thankless persons like you. Readers who enjoy, read it and admire it commenting here and sending me emails. So you can leave and read other hundreds and thousands of stories. Stop being a sissy.
6/10/20, 4:49 AM
Intriguing start! Would like to see where this goes...
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:56 AM
Agree very much with the first comment. Great writing of self-debasement and obliviousness... not to mention the twist at the end with Captain.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 1:03 AM
Really hot! Would love to see more
6/10/20, 12:24 AM
At first, I didn't like that you introduced Leo into the story. Pine's jocked up male slave world was so perfect, I wanted nothing to mess it up. I like your point that you wanted to mix it up instead of just enslaving one guy to the next. That said, I really liked the Leo factor in this. It was hot and it was a bit dark too. You portrayed the sense of urgency well as Pine rushed for the registration form.
Jai
6/9/20, 11:38 PM
Hot!! Good to see my name well used :)
6/9/20, 11:25 PM
ready for the next chapter
Anonymous
6/9/20, 10:50 PM
I keep coming back to these Flesh Lab stories. Please let there be more!
Jai
6/9/20, 10:45 PM
I would have preferred him to be conscious for the transformations. But otherwise the subject matter was great.
6/9/20, 10:16 PM
hope you continue this story. could be really interesting.