Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/11/20, 1:25 AM
Love it! Love the ending too where it hints to Dan becoming his big beary other half.
Martin
6/10/20, 9:16 PM
Really hot story!
Anonymous
6/10/20, 9:15 PM
So fucking HOT!!! I feel sorry for Brody but want to be him at the same time! Great writing and detail...
6/10/20, 8:51 PM
Hot as hell, and I love this twist on the mind control theme. Love it in general when guys are made to enjoy something they think they shouldn't enjoy. Thanks for posting!!
6/10/20, 8:42 PM
an excellent beginning, i'm looking forward to the doctor's verbal induction as well as the fuzzing over of the hero. the doctor's dialog seems like he'll either make the good captain either mentally young, dumb, or possibly both and no matter which i am SO down. i love giving a guy a good oral fixation, and I hope the good Doctor is a proper villain and not just an unscrupulous physician. the hero/villain power play will just add the cherry on top of what promises to be a new favorite series of mine.
RoboticXperiment03
6/10/20, 7:46 PM
An ideal future. I enjoy your dispassionate narrative style. It allows me to insert my high level of reaction to this experience and make it more personal for me.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/10/20, 4:50 PM
Very nicely done. I love idea of hypnosis, still have never been put under yet though. I would be willing to give your stories a quick look over if you need a second set of eyes for them.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:58 PM
Please continue,this series is a great.
6/10/20, 1:53 PM
Yeah there's definitely some more to come with these guys. It's a little subtle but there's already a difference in people who were gay before the nanites, and those who got turned by them. Not everyone can do what Ethan did in the last chapter :D Long-term, these guys are going to be like mitochondria - after all, they're "invisible" to the immune system (not that I have any idea how, I'm not an immunologist). I can confidently state we're not going Grey Goo on this one (at least, I'm not intending to take it there, but this is a community series). The nanites are designed to heal/protect/prolong mammalian biology, after all. By now they're basically tuned to human biology, but there's some interesting effects yet to come :D