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Captainlordgallifrey
6/9/20, 10:08 PM
Unique idea and very fun story. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.
6/9/20, 10:07 PM
Nah, he fucked up good. The data-retention mechanisms in Abel and the Berty's innovative little nanites got to know each other pretty well, and without supervision in Adam and Ben they've developed new priorities and routines for self-preservation and replication. It's not like Ben set out to do this, after all :D
6/9/20, 9:54 PM
at least we have established shutdown protocols . also it will allow us for the nanites to both on their own as well as once he gets a clue change what they're doing .
6/9/20, 9:22 PM
very hot ;) need more superhero hypno stories honestly
Muscle-Flex
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
This series is hot. Love the way that Andrew's domination and control of Danny and Chris is extensively described. Great humiliated and frustrated dialogue from Danny and Chris too.
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
loved it.
6/9/20, 8:50 PM
Greenwood? That was where -I think it's him- Kevin went at the end of getting the farmers! What happened there? I'm so excited!!!
Anonymous
6/9/20, 8:40 PM
Fun and full of potential!
6/9/20, 8:18 PM
Well, so much interest! Thank you all so much for reading and enjoying and taking the time to post your comments. I'll be working on chapter two, and possibly beyond, very soon.
6/9/20, 8:11 PM
Hey Man. Good to see your work!