Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:56 AM
Agree very much with the first comment. Great writing of self-debasement and obliviousness... not to mention the twist at the end with Captain.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 1:03 AM
Really hot! Would love to see more
6/10/20, 12:24 AM
At first, I didn't like that you introduced Leo into the story. Pine's jocked up male slave world was so perfect, I wanted nothing to mess it up. I like your point that you wanted to mix it up instead of just enslaving one guy to the next. That said, I really liked the Leo factor in this. It was hot and it was a bit dark too. You portrayed the sense of urgency well as Pine rushed for the registration form.
Jai
6/9/20, 11:38 PM
Hot!! Good to see my name well used :)
6/9/20, 11:25 PM
ready for the next chapter
Anonymous
6/9/20, 10:50 PM
I keep coming back to these Flesh Lab stories. Please let there be more!
Jai
6/9/20, 10:45 PM
I would have preferred him to be conscious for the transformations. But otherwise the subject matter was great.
6/9/20, 10:16 PM
hope you continue this story. could be really interesting.
Captainlordgallifrey
6/9/20, 10:08 PM
Unique idea and very fun story. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.
6/9/20, 10:07 PM
Nah, he fucked up good. The data-retention mechanisms in Abel and the Berty's innovative little nanites got to know each other pretty well, and without supervision in Adam and Ben they've developed new priorities and routines for self-preservation and replication. It's not like Ben set out to do this, after all :D