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6/8/20, 9:58 PM
Love this. I hope you'll continue.
6/8/20, 9:19 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone! It is greatly appreciated I am having a friend proof me from now on to avoid all the silly spelling errors! I will attempt to do a chapter 2 for this as well as include a link to the photo that inspired it.
6/8/20, 8:56 PM
Really enjoyed this and hope you'll continue! I agree about the proofreading! Also, pacing-wise, some of the story goes really fast (the beginning and ending especially -- you hit your stride in the middle). I'm curious about the terms of this little contract and how being taken by an incubus might change the main character.
6/8/20, 8:32 PM
Really fun ideas, but to me the story's a little too fast-paced. I think it would be hotter if you depicted some key moments (like Freddy's transformation) in greater detail.
6/8/20, 8:11 PM
Good concept and very well written. I hope there is a way for Marcus to regain his length.
Anonymous
6/8/20, 8:06 PM
Best story on here in a long while, well done. You've got a nice writing style.
Nov 1, 2013
Beefysub
6/8/20, 8:04 PM
It really does need a sequel!
Martin
6/8/20, 8:01 PM
Hi Master Primus, please assign your stories to the series. You have to enter the name of the series in the field "series name" when submitting your story (in your case "How it all began."). If you don't do that, your stories will be separate and not shown as a series. So far I've fixed it each time for you myself..
EJG
6/8/20, 7:39 PM
This is great,..but i'm fantasising about poor Marcus making the OTHER GUYS grow bigger muscles,bigger cocks. That will be my fantasy.Though this is still great
6/8/20, 7:22 PM
Oh yeah, hot stuff with the promise of more to cum!