Recent Comments

6/9/20, 12:01 AM
I'm definitely hoping for another story. love this!!
Anonymous
6/8/20, 11:41 PM
This is great! I really enjoyed reading this.
6/8/20, 11:30 PM
Great story - I'd like to see this universe fleshed out.
6/8/20, 11:26 PM
More please?
Anonymous
6/8/20, 10:27 PM
This was awesome! I can't wait for more!
azeq
6/8/20, 10:03 PM
Two couples accidentally walks in: two japanese exchange student girls with their boyfriends. The japanese girls change to their boyfriends dismay (at first) into big hunks, then their boyfriends follow!
6/8/20, 9:58 PM
Love this. I hope you'll continue.
6/8/20, 9:19 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone! It is greatly appreciated I am having a friend proof me from now on to avoid all the silly spelling errors! I will attempt to do a chapter 2 for this as well as include a link to the photo that inspired it.
6/8/20, 8:56 PM
Really enjoyed this and hope you'll continue! I agree about the proofreading! Also, pacing-wise, some of the story goes really fast (the beginning and ending especially -- you hit your stride in the middle). I'm curious about the terms of this little contract and how being taken by an incubus might change the main character.
6/8/20, 8:32 PM
Really fun ideas, but to me the story's a little too fast-paced. I think it would be hotter if you depicted some key moments (like Freddy's transformation) in greater detail.