Recent Comments

6/8/20, 8:11 PM
Good concept and very well written. I hope there is a way for Marcus to regain his length.
Anonymous
6/8/20, 8:06 PM
Best story on here in a long while, well done. You've got a nice writing style.
Nov 1, 2013
Beefysub
6/8/20, 8:04 PM
It really does need a sequel!
Martin
6/8/20, 8:01 PM
Hi Master Primus, please assign your stories to the series. You have to enter the name of the series in the field "series name" when submitting your story (in your case "How it all began."). If you don't do that, your stories will be separate and not shown as a series. So far I've fixed it each time for you myself..
EJG
6/8/20, 7:39 PM
This is great,..but i'm fantasising about poor Marcus making the OTHER GUYS grow bigger muscles,bigger cocks. That will be my fantasy.Though this is still great
6/8/20, 7:22 PM
Oh yeah, hot stuff with the promise of more to cum!
6/8/20, 6:57 PM
Ok so this story is not written by myself people. I don't get if you people can differentiate between a fiction and a real deal or not. It is written by slave Kyle who is not a professional writer. the purpose was to show you subs how he was dominated. So if you still can't understand well then its not my problem. And for those who wants to be a slave send me an email don't comment here as I usually don't read them.
Btm
6/8/20, 5:30 PM
i loved this so much!
6/8/20, 5:20 PM
I was a big fan of mindless mike too, keep it comin~
6/8/20, 5:12 PM
I agree with JockMatt that the paragraphs need work, remember to start a new one when a new character starts talking and when you change subject/topic. I also agree with Thom and Gymini29 that Trevor needs to have some changes of his own. I think the most interesting place this story could now go is outside the box. So far all the changes have been typical of this type of story and tame, bigger pecs and cocks (if anything they sound far too big for plausibility, 2.5 inch nipples?!) and you could do some more unusual changes. Also why not add drama by having the changes cause problems. Constant sex is great but a story can be more than hot sex and guys getting horny at their own muscles. Just something for you to think about, keep it up!