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EJG
6/8/20, 7:39 PM
This is great,..but i'm fantasising about poor Marcus making the OTHER GUYS grow bigger muscles,bigger cocks. That will be my fantasy.Though this is still great
6/8/20, 7:22 PM
Oh yeah, hot stuff with the promise of more to cum!
6/8/20, 6:57 PM
Ok so this story is not written by myself people. I don't get if you people can differentiate between a fiction and a real deal or not. It is written by slave Kyle who is not a professional writer. the purpose was to show you subs how he was dominated. So if you still can't understand well then its not my problem. And for those who wants to be a slave send me an email don't comment here as I usually don't read them.
Btm
6/8/20, 5:30 PM
i loved this so much!
6/8/20, 5:20 PM
I was a big fan of mindless mike too, keep it comin~
6/8/20, 5:12 PM
I agree with JockMatt that the paragraphs need work, remember to start a new one when a new character starts talking and when you change subject/topic. I also agree with Thom and Gymini29 that Trevor needs to have some changes of his own. I think the most interesting place this story could now go is outside the box. So far all the changes have been typical of this type of story and tame, bigger pecs and cocks (if anything they sound far too big for plausibility, 2.5 inch nipples?!) and you could do some more unusual changes. Also why not add drama by having the changes cause problems. Constant sex is great but a story can be more than hot sex and guys getting horny at their own muscles. Just something for you to think about, keep it up!
6/8/20, 4:09 PM
@robbotg99x4you and @Martin -- thanks so much for your comments! It's definitely good to know that the Machine is having its desired effect on you ;). It's really encouraging to hear from you!
6/8/20, 3:03 PM
I remember reading this on Tumblr and was disappointed when you never finished this story. Please continue!
6/8/20, 2:56 PM
Maybe the next installment can include Ron's hairy older brother walking in on his Nephew while he's doing an 'at home' work out in super light shorts and becomes infatuated with the boypussy he keeps catching glimpses of?
Jun 7, 2020
6/8/20, 2:45 PM
incredible job. thank you so much