Recent Comments

6/8/20, 5:12 PM
I agree with JockMatt that the paragraphs need work, remember to start a new one when a new character starts talking and when you change subject/topic. I also agree with Thom and Gymini29 that Trevor needs to have some changes of his own. I think the most interesting place this story could now go is outside the box. So far all the changes have been typical of this type of story and tame, bigger pecs and cocks (if anything they sound far too big for plausibility, 2.5 inch nipples?!) and you could do some more unusual changes. Also why not add drama by having the changes cause problems. Constant sex is great but a story can be more than hot sex and guys getting horny at their own muscles. Just something for you to think about, keep it up!
6/8/20, 4:09 PM
@robbotg99x4you and @Martin -- thanks so much for your comments! It's definitely good to know that the Machine is having its desired effect on you ;). It's really encouraging to hear from you!
6/8/20, 3:03 PM
I remember reading this on Tumblr and was disappointed when you never finished this story. Please continue!
6/8/20, 2:56 PM
Maybe the next installment can include Ron's hairy older brother walking in on his Nephew while he's doing an 'at home' work out in super light shorts and becomes infatuated with the boypussy he keeps catching glimpses of?
Jun 7, 2020
6/8/20, 2:45 PM
incredible job. thank you so much
6/8/20, 1:57 PM
I love this story! Dave is an adorable puppy boy, and I hope Nate fully embraces his new role. Yes, please keep giving us alternate points of view!
6/8/20, 1:43 PM
Yes ... more, please!
Berlinbeefysub
6/8/20, 1:13 PM
loved it! wish i were on the place of the kid. hope there's more to come!
6/8/20, 11:59 AM
I very much respect Wesley Bracken as a writer, but I am sorry to see this site being turned into some kind of advertisement hording for Patreon or similar. If this does not stop, I forsee most entries on here being tempting clips to get us to shell out money rather than consisting of real stories. Sigh...
6/8/20, 10:10 AM
Blufman has a great style. I never get tired of re-reading his stories. The writing is brutal, just like his characters. His descriptive powers about places, people, things makes him a powerful observer of the underbelly of society.