Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/4/20, 7:23 PM
more please. always live a submissive cop
nycboot
6/4/20, 7:16 PM
Damn, I find this story so hot. I almost like the points where the Mindgear puts Jese into a trance more than the sexual parts. I think I found one little discrepancy. In chapter 1, Dennis put a thumb drive in Jese's machine, but it is never mentioned that he removes it. If he had not removed it, I'm sure Jese would have noticed the thumb drive sticking in his machine when he re-entered the room. So, is Dennis's programming like malware that is forever in the game, or is it on the thumb drive (which can be removed if discovered)?
autoDream
6/4/20, 7:06 PM
Removed it. I guess I was thinking that as a non-furry type place it might be necessary. There will most likely be a separation between real world and game. I doubt the naga would be more than a random thought in the back of Jese's mind.
6/4/20, 6:40 PM
Hot, very very very hot. I enjoyed it twice in the same sitting. hehe I like how Dennis is playing with Jese in the real world while the anthros are playing with the bunny in the fantasy one. My one suggestion is that maybe Dennis should slowly start to wean Jese off from thinking he is totally submissive to the naga that way when the time comes there is no questioning that its to Dennis that Jese will happily submit to. But yeah, this is a super hot story. Love the set up. Love the antics. Love the mix of oral, anal, and also yay in the real world rimming. Sooo hot. Oh. The mind control plant was a nice touch. hehe Question though, where does the bestiality come in as I don't see an animal in the story?
Martin
6/4/20, 6:38 PM
Hi Mac, could you please reformat your story? Make sure you add an empty line to separate the paragraphs, please. Otherwise the story doesn't show up correctly in the site. Thank you, Martin
Anonymous
6/4/20, 6:27 PM
You're one of my faves for a reason! Sensational story!
Anonymous
6/4/20, 5:55 PM
This was so hot! Please make more
Anonymous
6/4/20, 5:42 PM
Hot!!!
6/4/20, 3:55 PM
on the contrary, I find this a change of pace and expertly written. I don't know why but this extreme level of resistance and dangerous plot condition on the main antagonist (or protagonist? ;) ) which is Peter makes the story even more sexier and sexier. it shows that the main character can bleed yet still can overcome obstacles in his way by domination his way out. Usually when I read stories here, it usually is the same cycle of meeting, normal conversation, unexpected hypno, resist, hypno sucess, sex, find new target and repeat....and it's getting repetitive. This series certainly has that, but it gives variety and unexpected plot adding abit more realism into the story makes the story siper sexy for me like I'm getting hypnotized by Peter himself. I'm so looking forward to this series and I hope this continues more.
Anonymous
6/4/20, 12:53 PM
so cool!! love how romantic the story is but also how Nate is enjoying changing Dave and dominating. maybe he'll get a bit kinkier? ;-)