Recent Comments

John
6/3/20, 9:25 PM
Wow! The whole series got me really worked up! I hope you write some more soon!
Anonymous
6/3/20, 8:49 PM
I'll chime in to say that the "behavioral changes without an explanation" part of the story did work for me. From the start, I didn't have any trouble following along. And I *really* enjoyed the parts in Chapter 2 where Hasan had no idea anything odd had happened to him, but was nonetheless acting on a completely different set of desires as if it was the most natural thing in the world. That said, I don't mean to trash anyone who may have found it confusing. We all read stories differently, and I just wanted to add my take here, so that the author would know this aspect did succeed for some readers, even if not for all of them.
suitedsubmissive
6/3/20, 8:45 PM
excellent story, and i love the incorporation of weigh gain and cock shrinkage!
6/3/20, 8:25 PM
I really dug this set of stories! I liked the paced unfolding of the plot, and the resolution and concept are both super hot. Awesome job!
Anonymous
6/3/20, 7:51 PM
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6/3/20, 7:38 PM
I'm excited to see where this story goes
6/3/20, 7:08 PM
I'm glad that everyone who liked the story did. I agree that it was a very slow build-up, but I was more interested in exploring the behavioral changes without an explanation. I'm not sure it works as well as I originally hoped, but the ending turned out good. I don't have any future plans for this series. I briefly considered an epilogue for these characters, but I didn't have much to add so I think it's best I leave it. Maybe I'll do another version of this story with the same concept, but I don't even have a basis for that yet, so it'll be a ways away.
6/3/20, 6:56 PM
hey there John, as someone who's following the events in states, I really admire your need to support your people in the injustice that's happening. take the time you need, this is the time for action after all. we'll be waiting for your return.
6/3/20, 6:35 PM
Fucking awesome! I love stories of men being changed into huge, submissive fatties. Making Derek smooth was a great way to emasculate him as well.
6/3/20, 5:59 PM
Ok, i really liked this story! It's a very interesting idea and I was very turned on with the idea of swapping roles with other people. I was very confused at first, so maybe it could have used a bit more explanation of what was happening earlier on. As well, I'm not going to lie, I had to make an actual chart to understand the swaps. However, for me that just means I'll enjoy it more the next time I read it. Overall, good job. I hope you write more in this series, maybe with a different group of people.