Recent Comments

6/3/20, 7:08 PM
I'm glad that everyone who liked the story did. I agree that it was a very slow build-up, but I was more interested in exploring the behavioral changes without an explanation. I'm not sure it works as well as I originally hoped, but the ending turned out good. I don't have any future plans for this series. I briefly considered an epilogue for these characters, but I didn't have much to add so I think it's best I leave it. Maybe I'll do another version of this story with the same concept, but I don't even have a basis for that yet, so it'll be a ways away.
6/3/20, 6:56 PM
hey there John, as someone who's following the events in states, I really admire your need to support your people in the injustice that's happening. take the time you need, this is the time for action after all. we'll be waiting for your return.
6/3/20, 6:35 PM
Fucking awesome! I love stories of men being changed into huge, submissive fatties. Making Derek smooth was a great way to emasculate him as well.
6/3/20, 5:59 PM
Ok, i really liked this story! It's a very interesting idea and I was very turned on with the idea of swapping roles with other people. I was very confused at first, so maybe it could have used a bit more explanation of what was happening earlier on. As well, I'm not going to lie, I had to make an actual chart to understand the swaps. However, for me that just means I'll enjoy it more the next time I read it. Overall, good job. I hope you write more in this series, maybe with a different group of people.
Jun 2, 2020
SSkinn
6/3/20, 4:55 PM
oh mate excellant tale and the first of many more i hope we love the same stuff , i have a hard wet one after the first few lines brilliant
May 26, 2020
Anonymous
6/3/20, 3:48 PM
This is easily the best story on the site. It's amazing!
Anonymous
6/3/20, 3:18 PM
eagerly waiting for more of this great story!
Anonymous
6/3/20, 2:35 PM
Fuck, must masturbate now.
6/3/20, 2:20 PM
YES! the chief will finally join in! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter. I love me some Bodybuilder cops
Anonymous
6/3/20, 2:14 PM
one solid block of text, not edited, is gtting in the way of your story.