Recent Comments

Jun 1, 2020
6/1/20, 9:13 PM
loooved the twist, just wish we'd gotten a little more confusion/resistance from Dane and a visual of Aston ;) thanks for uploading!!
Anonymous
6/1/20, 8:22 PM
Scary payback! Good to see the hero succeed!
Anonymous
6/1/20, 8:11 PM
absolutely loved it. would like to see this storyline continued
Alex Lat
6/1/20, 7:57 PM
i so happy that you continue to write, love this series.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 7:55 PM
Hot.... and so intriguing how all their different personalities are swapping around! Makes me wonder how they'll end up by the end of the story. Thank you for writing this story, I'm anticipating the next chapter!
6/1/20, 7:25 PM
A very intriguing chapter; we get to learn more about Dave and his father. Only makes the reader want to learn more about the father and what will happen to Nate and Dave.
Shadow
6/1/20, 7:03 PM
Yessss I've been looking forward to this story for ages. Glad to see it make a comeback and hope to see more soon
6/1/20, 6:56 PM
I hope we get a sequel!
Anonymous
6/1/20, 6:24 PM
The idea and the execution were wonderful! I really liked the putting up a fight theme. It's rare in these parts but very welcomed
Jun 1, 2020
6/1/20, 6:22 PM
Hot story! The end was a bit of a surprise and I loved it!