Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/1/20, 7:55 PM
Hot.... and so intriguing how all their different personalities are swapping around! Makes me wonder how they'll end up by the end of the story. Thank you for writing this story, I'm anticipating the next chapter!
6/1/20, 7:25 PM
A very intriguing chapter; we get to learn more about Dave and his father. Only makes the reader want to learn more about the father and what will happen to Nate and Dave.
Shadow
6/1/20, 7:03 PM
Yessss I've been looking forward to this story for ages. Glad to see it make a comeback and hope to see more soon
6/1/20, 6:56 PM
I hope we get a sequel!
Anonymous
6/1/20, 6:24 PM
The idea and the execution were wonderful! I really liked the putting up a fight theme. It's rare in these parts but very welcomed
Jun 1, 2020
6/1/20, 6:22 PM
Hot story! The end was a bit of a surprise and I loved it!
6/1/20, 6:05 PM
Thanks guys. I agree that the story could have gone on longer, but as my anonymous friend above says, it has to end somehow. Jonas' last piece of dialog is the last piece of tension resolving, and everything past that would have just been stepping through a dance we all know the moves to. I honestly considered just ending it there, but I wanted to give a hint of the direction that Chip's life took once Jonas had him in his grasp. Glad everyone seems to be enjoying this one so much. I honestly had no idea which way the story would go, it grew out of an idea I had on Saturday and my fingers just wouldn't stop typing until it was all out.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 3:21 PM
the story has to end somehow. How much more exposition did the author have to go through? It was hot. I enjoyed.
6/1/20, 2:48 PM
curious to hear about Adam's soul mate. maybe some old orders art still running in him...
6/1/20, 1:44 PM
I'm sad this story doesn't have more comments. It seems to have gotten lost in the flood of stories posted this weekend. It's one of the hottest stories I've read in some time, so anyone who likes my stories should check it out!