Recent Comments

6/1/20, 10:59 AM
i am loving your work... MORE!
Ng5hvlo4
6/1/20, 10:52 AM
And have no fear; the conversion of the world begins in the next few chapters
6/1/20, 10:04 AM
A nice little interlude, although I'm eager to see how the program will spread and society will change.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 8:45 AM
excellent
May 30, 2020
6/1/20, 8:34 AM
very hot, has me rock hard. definitely would like to see more. agree with the other commenter, try dragging the transformation out a lil more.
6/1/20, 7:43 AM
Agreed that the pace speeds up a LOT at the end, with multiple twists quickly piling up. But I still thought this was a great story, and I loved the slow build.
6/1/20, 7:23 AM
I liked this! You do a really good job of world-building, which can be a challenge when you have such a deeply mind-controlled narrator.
6/1/20, 7:14 AM
Continue please....need the whole week!
6/1/20, 6:53 AM
This story was published a long time ago and will probably not be continued ... but I would like to know how it continues