Recent Comments

5/11/24, 12:01 AM
Why do I want to be balding now lmao

5/11/24, 6:29 PM
@[blahblahok](/user/show/10006000) Glad it made an impact!

5/11/24, 7:02 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) So good! Got me hornier than anything else on here for ages, really hope you write more! And kinda looking forward to mpb lol

5/13/24, 11:30 PM
@[blahblahok](/user/show/10006000) Glad you liked the style the narrator gets. It's different, but that can be exciting.

6/28/25, 6:55 AM
@[blahblahok](/user/show/10006000) Soooo I’m not sure if anyone will see this update, but my hairline has receded so quickly I’m pretty noticeably balding, like my hairline is nearly at the top of my head. My barber told me today that he was shocked how much hair I had lost since he last cut my hair lmao. I’m 23, had no hair loss when I posted this comment I guess fantasies do come true XD

6/28/25, 12:27 PM
@[blahblahok](/user/show/10006000) That was a fast recession, but I'm glad you are happy with your mpb journey. It can be pretty sext for some of us.

7/4/25, 8:57 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Honestly, looking at photos, it did start a bit before that comment, but mannnn it’s gotten so quick in the last 6 months lmao, it’s getting noticed now

7/4/25, 9:44 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Ok wtf I literally have just discovered I have a bald patch, if you wanna see dm lol
Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:24 PM
When chapter 2? 😭
Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:19 PM
The level of detail and immersion was intense at the start but it’s so perfect as a way of “journaling”. Really really enjoyed this start to the story. Definitely interested to read the horny way they physically changed but if that’s planned for far into the future that’s also fine, I really enjoyed your writing style and keen to see more!
7/4/25, 1:54 AM
I've had this series bookmarked for ages and it's a crime that I didn't read it sooner, this was SO good!! I really loved the worldbuilding and this checked a lot of my boxes. I'm excited to read the rest of the series!

7/4/25, 9:11 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Oh great! Well you know what they say, better late than never!
Mark
7/4/25, 7:35 PM
Loved this!

7/4/25, 7:37 PM
@Mark 👍
7/4/25, 3:51 PM
Nice one Cicero, very erotic!

7/4/25, 7:36 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Thanks
Anonymous
7/4/25, 6:31 PM
I can't wait to see how this keeps going. I'm loving it so far.
7/4/25, 5:26 PM
Hot story Bro

7/4/25, 5:34 PM
@[Chav lad](/user/show/2652549) thanks brother
7/4/25, 4:41 PM
I really hope you continue this story!
7/4/25, 2:53 PM
Great writing and level of detail with the characters. I was picturing the old Edgewater Beach Hotel in Chicago when I read your story.

7/4/25, 3:53 PM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Thank you so much! I will admit I have never been to Chicago so I love that you could visualise somewhere real based on my writing! Just googled the Edgewater Beach Hotel....that's actually pretty darn close to what was in my head!