This story is amazing, you nailed the ending there, thank you for writing this.

Normally I don't like to respond to comments on a story, because I don't want to feel like I'm just author-spamming the comments, but I saw Nutiper responding to comments on his story, and I really like the way he batched his replies into a comment or two. Gonna give that a try here. @Hypnothrill - Thanks! I had no idea about the twist when I started writing. The first attempt at this story (that stalled out around 2000 words) was about a spell on the doorframe, and everytime somebody tried to leave the apartment they'd find an excuse to stay. Eventually the excuses started to turn sexual, and the roommates stopped leaving the house because they were too busy fucking eachother. The twist only showed up when I wrote the scene where Clay and Adrian come out of the shower and I asked myself what Jonny would have been doing while he waited. @Lytcom - Thanks! Though now I'm starting to ask myself if I have unresolved issues with my old roommates. @Tattcub - Thanks buddy, it's always great to hear from you. @Feed Your Head - Thank fuck! I was worried that I brushed over the physical transformations too quickly, but I wanted to let the reader fill it in with their own details. And then for the roommates, I thought maybe I skipped their struggle too much, but I figured we got to see the inside of Clay's head and that was good enough. Thanks for reading. @Wonder Bread - Thanks! if you liked this vibe, go track down ONIX's "That Old Black Magic" series. It's a way more detailed look at a guy who has some bothersome roommates, and one of my biggest inspirations. @Cris Kane - Thanks! I would love to read another Mariposa story. Mariposa Honeymoon is one of my favourites, and really set my expectations for my last trip to cancun. You'll be delighted to know that everything went exactly as you wrote. @Max Ryon - Thanks man! I'm glad the topical subject worked. I started writing this like a month ago, before any of the re-opening started to happen, but I got bogged down. Just glad to get it out there before we're all back to life as normal. And thank you all for writing comments. I really only write for the comments and the blowjobs, and this whole anonymous writer thing makes it hard to give you all my address for the blowjobs.

Thanks for your feedback. You make a good point. I agree this story works best as a single piece (which was always the intent when I started writing). I guess when making the decision to chapter or not, I should focus less on the number of words and more on what the goal of the writing is. :-)

more please

the ending was a tiiny bit abrupt but God this is such a hot story

Damn, but this is really hot! Whew. Also, I appreciated it being posted as a single story. I felt like what made it so damn hot and intense was how it was this uninterrupted flow of gradual corruption, start to finish. I feel like the gradual-MC stories are hard to do well, and take a lot of attention and patience on the part of the author, but they are *so* hot when the author pulls them off. If this story had been broken up into chapters, I don't think it would have worked as well for me. If I wasn't reading it in one go, I wouldn't have found it as intense as I did. I think the effect would have felt diluted. So, all that to say, I'm glad you posted it as is!

This story has it all...it's topical, funny, hot, and surprising. As always, I love your work!

wow! good start, can't wait for the next chapter.

this reads so much like a Bara by Itto Mentaiko ! A very well crafted story!

Medetashi, medetashi. Thank you for creating a wonderful story set in Japan. It was truly an enjoyable experience.