Recent Comments

5/31/20, 6:24 AM
Great story! I love the Simon Says scene--it's rare to get a picture into the head of a mind-controlled person watching their "victim." And an Ethan with green hair...and a belt buckle--oh my God, that's from "Good Boy Handbook!" :D Crossover universe CONFIRMED! :p
Anonymous
5/31/20, 6:03 AM
this is so good! love the cartoonish elements
5/31/20, 3:41 AM
You've hit a great part in this chapter where they end up bigger than intended. I would not mind at all if that theme were continued! Regardless, loving where you're taking this and I'll keep refreshing for the next chapter!
M.
5/31/20, 3:27 AM
Holy FUCK! That was such a hot chapter. Many thanks!
5/31/20, 3:25 AM
And so the origin of Jeremy's world came from what seems to be innocent play.
May 30, 2020
Anonymous
5/31/20, 3:14 AM
Amazing!! Thank you so much ;)
5/31/20, 3:10 AM
Love the Doctor Who reference, keep it up!
Anonymous
5/31/20, 2:57 AM
I am also not a fan of the 'pics', but I simply don't click. I use my imagination. Most of the times, WC describes his characters well, just as you do. This story was a playful 'adaptation'. I glad it was well received.
May 30, 2020
5/31/20, 2:12 AM
It's really good, but slow it down a bit more. The transformation sounds fun and interesting but it ended when I was starting to get into it. I like the descriptions but try to pace yourself a bit more. Still, I am hoping you continue!
Swizzington
5/31/20, 1:19 AM
It's just two random employees :-)