Recent Comments

5/31/20, 3:10 AM
Love the Doctor Who reference, keep it up!
Anonymous
5/31/20, 2:57 AM
I am also not a fan of the 'pics', but I simply don't click. I use my imagination. Most of the times, WC describes his characters well, just as you do. This story was a playful 'adaptation'. I glad it was well received.
May 30, 2020
5/31/20, 2:12 AM
It's really good, but slow it down a bit more. The transformation sounds fun and interesting but it ended when I was starting to get into it. I like the descriptions but try to pace yourself a bit more. Still, I am hoping you continue!
Swizzington
5/31/20, 1:19 AM
It's just two random employees :-)
CMC
5/31/20, 1:07 AM
Are the two boys at the end supposed to be Ethan and Toby? or just other random servants?
5/31/20, 12:46 AM
I feel sad for Peter and Roger; the story is a slow scam of them and their idea by Hunter. But a good story.
5/31/20, 12:40 AM
This was a sexy and absurdist tale, Willie. Excellent as usual. For those of us rusty in Latin, what exactly did the first spell do? Did it turn our hero bisexual or just into a slut?
Swizzington
5/30/20, 11:21 PM
Yeah, for once I thought I'd do something different and just write a story with no twists or tables being turned. Just a straightforward, simple enslavement :-)
5/30/20, 11:02 PM
Really enjoying this story. Great work :)
Anonymous
5/30/20, 10:58 PM
so hot ! I was hoping the nerds will find out in the middle what is happening and mind controls Hunter. But the conclusion is still hot. Would've been nice to be there when Gabriel was initiated to submission. But yeah hot story overall. I personally would rather read a long finished story than wait for chapters. stories like these tend to lose my interest half way if I have to wait. But reading it as a whole makes it more sexy and fun to read.