Recent Comments

5/30/20, 10:57 PM
Gotta be honest, I was reeeeeeeeeeeally hoping for the nerd pair to turn the tables on Hunter and control the rest... or at least one of them. To each their own... not bad tho.
5/30/20, 10:45 PM
I had started writing a lockdown edition of the "Mariposa" series, but I felt like being trapped in one location would be too limiting to the storytelling possibilities. Naturally, you found the solution: have them break quarantine because they no longer give a fuck. This is why you are, and remain, the king.
5/30/20, 10:00 PM
missed ur work dude
CMC
5/30/20, 9:46 PM
I loved this story! so so so hot!
5/30/20, 9:17 PM
Great work :) I like the gradual changes and there is so much potential for more scenes. Please continue.
Swizzington
5/30/20, 8:37 PM
Gonna apologize in advance if there are typos or grammatical errors. I've read it through a couple of times but the trouble doing it this way is it's so long that at some point it becomes kinda difficult to proofread thoroughly :-) If anyone finds any particularly egregious typos, I would be most grateful if you could email me so I can correct it!
5/30/20, 8:00 PM
I thought it would go best under "Hypnosis" just because the Master uses his seductive voice to control Alex and Brody, and he keeps repeating certain keywords, like a hypnotist would. But I admit I don't fully understand the difference between the "Hypnosis" and "Brainwashing" categories.
May 30, 2020
Anonymous
5/30/20, 7:48 PM
Wow this was hotttt
5/30/20, 7:10 PM
interesting start! consider me hooked!
5/30/20, 7:03 PM
looks promising!!!