Recent Comments

CMC
5/30/20, 9:46 PM
I loved this story! so so so hot!
5/30/20, 9:17 PM
Great work :) I like the gradual changes and there is so much potential for more scenes. Please continue.
Swizzington
5/30/20, 8:37 PM
Gonna apologize in advance if there are typos or grammatical errors. I've read it through a couple of times but the trouble doing it this way is it's so long that at some point it becomes kinda difficult to proofread thoroughly :-) If anyone finds any particularly egregious typos, I would be most grateful if you could email me so I can correct it!
5/30/20, 8:00 PM
I thought it would go best under "Hypnosis" just because the Master uses his seductive voice to control Alex and Brody, and he keeps repeating certain keywords, like a hypnotist would. But I admit I don't fully understand the difference between the "Hypnosis" and "Brainwashing" categories.
May 30, 2020
Anonymous
5/30/20, 7:48 PM
Wow this was hotttt
5/30/20, 7:10 PM
interesting start! consider me hooked!
5/30/20, 7:03 PM
looks promising!!!
5/30/20, 6:58 PM
Why is it categorized as hypnosis though?
May 30, 2020
5/30/20, 6:49 PM
i wonder if Cole will continue growing manlier and more into an alpha as he keeps interacting with other guys! I liked it
5/30/20, 6:32 PM
Extremely hot and extremely well written!! Love watching Lucas fight against the inevitable and making progress against the tide but then ultimately failing and falling to his Master! Such a good story! Hope to read more from you!