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May 30, 2020
5/30/20, 6:49 PM
i wonder if Cole will continue growing manlier and more into an alpha as he keeps interacting with other guys! I liked it
5/30/20, 6:32 PM
Extremely hot and extremely well written!! Love watching Lucas fight against the inevitable and making progress against the tide but then ultimately failing and falling to his Master! Such a good story! Hope to read more from you!
Anonymous
5/30/20, 6:28 PM
Love this. Really hot and well-written. And that whole blowjob scene was *fantastic*. So well done. I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/30/20, 6:11 PM
interesting story! I love corruption leading to masculinization!
5/30/20, 5:50 PM
Hot story! Loved how the nerd grew hungry with power toward the end!
May 30, 2020
Anonymous
5/30/20, 5:35 PM
great start! Get revenge on those gym guys!
Anonymous
5/30/20, 5:33 PM
Fantastic, can't wait to see where it goes!
5/30/20, 5:28 PM
Let me know what you're interested in having Thor & Lan get up to! :)
5/30/20, 5:18 PM
I've read the first Chapter and really like your story. Great idea and setup.
swngbthways
5/30/20, 5:04 PM
I honestly feel making Leo a "villain" will put this series into more like a "Marvel or DC" world. With the first series where Pine knew his powers in high school (where he was bullied) and STILL emerged from it with his "values" intact, the events have a lot of humanity to the chapters -- ESPECIALLY when Pine and Mike fell in love with each other "naturally." I feel like Leo got drunk from his powers early on and didn't think of consequences for the lives of the guys he put under. I personally like the idea of the younger Pine teaching the older Leo about how to responsibly use his powers. BUT those are just my opinions. You are the author and this your world. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of it. ;)