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May 30, 2020
Anonymous
5/30/20, 5:35 PM
great start! Get revenge on those gym guys!
Anonymous
5/30/20, 5:33 PM
Fantastic, can't wait to see where it goes!
5/30/20, 5:28 PM
Let me know what you're interested in having Thor & Lan get up to! :)
5/30/20, 5:18 PM
I've read the first Chapter and really like your story. Great idea and setup.
swngbthways
5/30/20, 5:04 PM
I honestly feel making Leo a "villain" will put this series into more like a "Marvel or DC" world. With the first series where Pine knew his powers in high school (where he was bullied) and STILL emerged from it with his "values" intact, the events have a lot of humanity to the chapters -- ESPECIALLY when Pine and Mike fell in love with each other "naturally." I feel like Leo got drunk from his powers early on and didn't think of consequences for the lives of the guys he put under. I personally like the idea of the younger Pine teaching the older Leo about how to responsibly use his powers. BUT those are just my opinions. You are the author and this your world. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of it. ;)
5/30/20, 5:04 PM
I agree with Thom, time for the main character to enjoy the ride as well.
5/30/20, 5:02 PM
so fucking hot! love a twink with a huge cock hypnotizing anyone he wants! can't wait for part two!
May 30, 2020
5/30/20, 5:02 PM
This is really only the second time I have tried writing erotica. hopefully it is better than the last one thank you all for reading!
5/30/20, 4:50 PM
fuck, such a great follow up!! love Dustin playing with his virgin ass, stretching it wide, and Adam just LOVING it. Love the twist at the end with him resisting and Dustin taking him further and further down. can't wait for the next chapter!
May 28, 2020
5/30/20, 4:40 PM
how is this a #big sub small top story?