Recent Comments

5/29/20, 4:51 PM
oooooooh,I really wanna see where this is going
5/29/20, 4:41 PM
Another great story. Your last two stories are worthy of continuation to show the various transformations of individuals and expansion of the stories. Plus you haven't done a series for a while, so I'm agreeing with Hypnothrill that you continue with this story and the lighthouse story.
5/29/20, 4:34 PM
Really enjoyed this story...Nothing hotter than a transformation into a SKINHEAD !!! Also loved the PISS parts, but I may be in the minority in that a cock cage doesn't excite me. The only thing I missed was more rearranged past memories which I found very hot in the previous chapters....However, I always love your writing...AND AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT STORIES !...Please don't keep your fan's waiting too long !!!
5/29/20, 4:27 PM
You're right not to feel Leo as a villain; he seems to be a chaos agent. Definitely in this chapter Pine is trying to deal with the chaos Leo caused only to have Leo cause more chaos by sending Luke in as a present. I think that's the proper role for him in this part of your universe, not really causing death and danger (those are elements in William's world), but causing upheaval and chaos.
5/29/20, 4:27 PM
I really like the fact that Master isn't that blessed down under,it somehow adds appeal to enslaving a team of muscled jocks for me. I'd like to know how that encounter with the bank clerk went tho
Anonymous
5/29/20, 4:21 PM
This was hot! I'm looking forward to the next one
5/29/20, 4:13 PM
Well, the command "Use your imagination, bitch" is addressed to the reader, not to Willie. And like a lot of humor, I was relying on subversion of expectations. I see it as a light-hearted and affectionate tweak to a formula that Willie has perfected, not unlike the twist at the end that the Master only has a 5 inch long cock (unlike the footlong monster we see in Willie's original story).
Anonymous
5/29/20, 4:08 PM
"I was not intending to make fun of Willie . . ." -- How do you square that statement with 'Use your imagination, bitch'?
5/29/20, 4:04 PM
Hot!
5/29/20, 3:58 PM
I was not intending to make fun of Willie, who agree is one of the site's best writers. I just wanted to include a joke about the technique of linking to photos in a story, especially when a character is already beautifully described in words (as was the case in Willie's original story).