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5/29/20, 6:38 PM
Fun! I love how you stealthily slipped a "Temple of Priapus" sequel into this series.
autoDream
5/29/20, 6:25 PM
I'm not sure were ever going to see the Brother enter the game. Not impossible but not really something thats on my radar atm. The original idea would have taken the path of Dennis convincing Colin to take advantage of his annoying little "step bro". For now, I think the story will probably focus on a strange story line in game, slowly changing Jese's interactions with Dennis outside the game. Seemingly instant changes to Jese that skip ages of self reflection. Playing on this weird sort of "in the matter of one seemingly quick slumber, Jese goes from not talking to Dennis, to being hyper fixated on the fact that he is gay."
Angelino
5/29/20, 5:47 PM
The story had been great so far! Would love to see Trevor get some finally.
5/29/20, 5:36 PM
okaaaaaaay,now it's getting even more interesting
5/29/20, 4:51 PM
oooooooh,I really wanna see where this is going
5/29/20, 4:41 PM
Another great story. Your last two stories are worthy of continuation to show the various transformations of individuals and expansion of the stories. Plus you haven't done a series for a while, so I'm agreeing with Hypnothrill that you continue with this story and the lighthouse story.
5/29/20, 4:34 PM
Really enjoyed this story...Nothing hotter than a transformation into a SKINHEAD !!! Also loved the PISS parts, but I may be in the minority in that a cock cage doesn't excite me. The only thing I missed was more rearranged past memories which I found very hot in the previous chapters....However, I always love your writing...AND AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT STORIES !...Please don't keep your fan's waiting too long !!!
5/29/20, 4:27 PM
You're right not to feel Leo as a villain; he seems to be a chaos agent. Definitely in this chapter Pine is trying to deal with the chaos Leo caused only to have Leo cause more chaos by sending Luke in as a present. I think that's the proper role for him in this part of your universe, not really causing death and danger (those are elements in William's world), but causing upheaval and chaos.
5/29/20, 4:27 PM
I really like the fact that Master isn't that blessed down under,it somehow adds appeal to enslaving a team of muscled jocks for me. I'd like to know how that encounter with the bank clerk went tho
Anonymous
5/29/20, 4:21 PM
This was hot! I'm looking forward to the next one