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Anonymous
12/25/24, 10:31 PM
Awesome story. Can’t wait for more!
12/25/24, 5:38 PM
A spectacular conclusion to this second act, my friend! So very many thoughts to process! Does Larry's sister know he's a werewolf, now? Or does she assume that he realized he is gay and ran away to be true to himself? Wonder what will come of Alpha Toddson and King Ted- I don't doubt Toddson will stay true to his word, but is he willing to take the blame because he thinks he is in better standing with King Ted than Pete and Alpha Ruiz were? Speaking of Pete... all the other Alphas seem to go by their last names, but not Pete. I get the vibe that, while Pete was a decent man, he was not well-suited for leadership. At least the kind of leadership that werewolf packs need. He seems like he had a bad experience under a previous pack and wanted to try and be kinder and less strict, but werewolves need a firm hand to be kept in line. He tried to be too clever- infiltrating the police department and all that- and it very nearly ended up costing the pack everything. Toddson seems like a better pick, but there's still the lurking question of what these "mindgames" Nando keeps referencing were. Hopefully Mullins does okay. Zack may have gotten off lightly thanks to still being in his stirrings, but I have the feeling that Mullins is going to have a clear-eyed view of what drove Nando to defect to Pete's pack. But who knows, perhaps Mullins' natural disciplinarian personality predisposes him to this sort of stuff. I have a feeling Carlos- Alpha Ruiz- will strike a good balance between Pete's compassion and benevolence, and Toddson's iron fist. Was *not* expecting Yousef's grandfather to be mondjugen. That'll be interesting. Alpha Ruiz is going to "tolerate" Bill's explorations into magic? Pete really *was* permissive, wasn't he? A little sad that we don't get to see King Ted's orgy. But all in all, a sad, bittersweet, and sexy conclusion! Ready for Act 3 in the new year!

12/25/24, 8:42 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the kind words. I had hoped to indicate that Larry’s sister is a witch (purple flash in the eyes, knows Barb, who has directed where to find Larry) and thus understanding of Larry as a wolf (his absence & the risks presented to his family) as opposed to an ignorant mortal. Should I make it more explicit? Alpha Pete & Last Names: you’re the first to pick up in that! I’m saving the explanation of that for the next novella. King Teodoro will have choice words about that. Yousef’s Baba: Yousef is speaking to his father. Baba is an Arabic version of ‘Papa.’ Do I need to be clearer? Alpha Ruiz & “tolerating” Yousef & Bill’s outside faith / practices… it’s a new lawman in town, & I’m really interested to explore that more explicitly in the next chapter. King Teodoro’s Orgy: why do you think I’m writing a third novella?😜

12/25/24, 10:21 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) I must've missed the bit about the flash of purple in her eyes. Keep it as-is! And I know "Baba" is Arabic for "Dad" or "Papa," but I was thrown off when he described himself as a grandfather- obviously, Yousef has siblings! I'm very curious to see more about Alpha Ruiz... what his "style" of Alpha-ing is going to be. And I can't wait for that orgy to head up Book 3!
10/6/24, 8:12 PM
I’m a black reader. This really turned me off from this series. It’s the only one where race is used to down another race . And of course it had to be white men putting blacks in their place as sluts . Why not a white man using Asian women and a Black man putting him in his place. Making the white quarterback into the town whore, and him give Black men the power to turn all the white young men into sluts. Just saying. And I do like a lot of your work.

12/25/24, 10:11 PM
@[SacGuy](/user/show/10054871) Sorry this wasn't to your taste, but if it helps, I am also a black man who wrote this to indulge a fetish of mine. I realize it isn't for everyone.
12/25/24, 6:34 PM
Thanks for the wonderful Christmas gift Jack!! I enjoyed it so much this morning that I blew a big load in the shower in your honor. You can sure get me worked up. Merry Christmas Jack.
12/25/24, 12:12 PM
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

12/25/24, 6:22 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you sir
12/25/24, 1:50 PM
Great Christmas gift for the fans! Sammy takes on the Marines and conquers! Thanks again, Jack.

12/25/24, 6:22 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks for being there bud
hairyartist
12/25/24, 1:54 PM
Awesome Man, Thanks!!

12/25/24, 6:22 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks for reading!
12/25/24, 3:43 PM
I'm loving this series. Original idea and well written. Can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

12/25/24, 5:50 PM
@[jsmith2000](/user/show/10006112) Thanks! That gives me motivation to continue writing 😊

12/25/24, 6:10 PM
@[AshePleasure](/user/show/10048310) Yes, please do! You just cannot stop now!

12/25/24, 6:12 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I don’t intend to, we’re getting to the best part.
12/25/24, 2:30 PM
One of the hottest stories in this site has a continuation, and what a hot story this is! Love Lance's transformation. Hope to see more of Lance and maybe others from the naughty list

12/25/24, 4:03 PM
@[fgdbar](/user/show/10001414) Thanks for the kind words! We’re so glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully you won’t have to wait so long for the next installment!
12/25/24, 3:20 PM
Fantastic!