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5/28/20, 1:49 PM
Very hot!
Willie Cici
5/28/20, 1:42 PM
HK - go to page three of the new stories section and check out my series, "Best Laid Plans". The summary for the newest entry, on the scroll, is the summary for the first story. When you open up the link to see all the stories, you may find an individual summary for each story. My point is this: when you have a series, since the scroll of stories only lists the first story entry, then it would be nice to have a series summary and then a story summary. If Martin can make that change, when he has time, then great. I'm sure Martin has enough on his plate dealing with the website and the minion of writers.
5/28/20, 1:38 PM
Here is the original: https://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_115430.html It came from this branch: https://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_68913.html
Anonymous
5/28/20, 12:49 PM
great job man, thank you!
5/28/20, 12:19 PM
Really enjoying this! Sometimes the pacing felt a bit fast to me! I would
May 26, 2020
5/28/20, 11:41 AM
This is an amazing story. I didn't appreciate it for what it is right away so I will have to re-read it when I'm in the right frame of mind. I went in expecting a quick, dirty story but this is more of a narrative. It's an experience. It's very passionate and tender and it requires more attention than I gave it to really appreciate it. You should be proud, its a wonderful piece of writing.
May 28, 2020
5/28/20, 11:37 AM
This is good, but slow down! I want more time to savor the transformation. Please continue
5/28/20, 10:05 AM
Damn hot
TwinkMaster
5/28/20, 8:51 AM
Thank you soooo much for bringing this story back!! I have missed roger and his daddy slave. I love seeing how obedient Phil has become to his young master, but please don’t make him feminine. Seeing him dressed up in female clothing is a big turn off! I also don’t want Michael to have any control whatsoever. As soon as he arrives to the lake house Roger must immediately put him under. He will make a great addition to Roger’s slaves. Having two older hunky lawyers under the control of someone younger is so hot!! Maybe you can make Michael become a butler or bodyguard. whose only purpose is to serve his master? I love your writing, you’re so great at bringing these stories to life! I hope we don’t have to wait so long for the next chapter <3
5/28/20, 7:47 AM
Never read the series before, but holy crap, this is one of the hottest, most well-written story I ever read on this site!!! Read everything in three hours so much I was into it! First time chapters were close to 10k words and I had no issue reading them! Welcome back, I guess! Hope you'll write others wonderful tales once you finished this! Take your time, thiq is quality content!