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suitedsubmissive
5/27/20, 7:00 PM
Paulie's transformation is such a hot read, Sir. cannot wait for the next chapter!
5/27/20, 6:40 PM
Awesome chapter! Great job!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 6:31 PM
This is hot, and very intriguing... It feels like there's a subtle reality-warping element going on, and we're seeing its effects but we don't know the explanation yet... I'm intrigued! I hope you explore this story further with more chapters!
EJG
5/27/20, 6:27 PM
Hot stuff. Yeah. Hope 2 see Steve's pecs GROW BIGGER!. Maybe some infectious pec growth?
5/27/20, 6:06 PM
The one thing I will say as a note is that I hope there is not too much emphasis on the AI. Like I am fine with it being the tool that Dennis uses to take over others but not so much if it becomes a sort of independent character that say manipulates either Jese or Dennis for its own needs. Hehe, well you should be sorry. :) grin. Rimming is de best! Oh yeah, its such an amazing idea, with such potential, such rich potential for twist and turns and fun sexy uses. I really like that, that slow, unrealized transformation into good boy. Especially towards his brother's friend who just seems so cool all of a sudden, so cool and sexy and who causes him to feel good when he compliments him. Ooh, I wonder if there is a way for the brother to also be introduced to the MMO tech, cause that might be fun, for Dennis to have both of them. lol I could totally see a blushing Jese not realize why he feels so good when he is a good boy. Or maybe he finds himself accepting quests that have him pretend to be a pet or slave at his master's knee, head by his crotch, as the master talks business, which ends with him sort of loosing time as he begins to enjoy the pleasant scents that maybe even taste as he sniffs and licks cock. Its part of the mission of course, and so its not gay, its just a quest! hehe But yeah, really good fun stuff. Love the idea, love the start, so very sexy!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 6:06 PM
Love this. Love their dynamic too. Wouldn't say no to a second chapter, if you're inclined...
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 6:04 PM
I wish I could find somebody like this to blackmail me, lucky kid.
5/27/20, 5:59 PM
I wish you actually put a story synopsis in each story rather than simply copy the series description again and again.
5/27/20, 5:55 PM
I'm excited for the finale
5/27/20, 5:40 PM
Very nice, love to be mistaken for some one else, that way i got in to this house. Hoping Ben, don't try to fight this.