Recent Comments

5/27/20, 5:28 PM
@Elmara - Dennis surely has a character of his own, and I'm sure the two will meet ingame at some point. As for clothing, already something that is to be explore to varying degrees. As I write chapter 2, its already a very interesting detail. I'm sure you will love what I do with it, although it still being a little more discreet than a jock strap in plain view, haha. Aside from that, Dennis will surely be manipulating Jese in many ways, but I'll explore that naturally as the story takes me where ever it does. @Heru - Glad you've enjoyed it as well. Sorry I couldn't get more emphasis on rimming ;) Glad you enjoy the idea, as its been a huge fantasy of mine as well. Love how it bridges a sense of realism, with the impossible that video games can introduce us too, and the hopefully powerful experiences VR will get to someday. In terms of future reactions with Dennis, and men in general? Jese will find it strange that he wants to impress them? Whether it be a random opportunity such as cooking breakfast for them, or choice of clothing when around them. I'm sure it would be a total mistake if Jese happen to show up in front of Dennis in just his underwear. haha As for the other comments, as always, thanks for reading!! And for the compliments. (As always, feel free to email me.)
Anonymous
5/27/20, 5:11 PM
Dude, fantastic piece of work! If you hadn’t mentioned it was your first time I totally wouldn’t have known. Fingers crossed it’s the first of many ;)
5/27/20, 5:10 PM
this is my favorite story in a long time..thank you
5/27/20, 5:09 PM
Great story. I have thoughts and dream about a game, that is hypnosis, you are in the game, Under hypnosis 24/7. This story is the answer to a fantasy, I love to be in. Thank you, I look for more. Rob.
5/27/20, 4:56 PM
I hope you can get it, I like your job Hypnothrill
5/27/20, 4:30 PM
Hi, Great start of your story. I be hard till the next part.
5/27/20, 4:29 PM
This is now one of my favorite stories! Hits all my buttons. So well written. So well described. The pace and extremity of the changes are right on. This would be an awesome script for an erotic movie with how it is so detailed. Heck as an actor, I'd play any part, but would love to play Paulie as he's living my greatest fantasy!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 4:28 PM
LOVE the feet pheromone seduction :)
Hunger
5/27/20, 4:19 PM
really fucking hot. Keep it up!
5/27/20, 3:35 PM
There will be one final part after this.