Recent Comments

5/27/20, 4:30 PM
Hi, Great start of your story. I be hard till the next part.
5/27/20, 4:29 PM
This is now one of my favorite stories! Hits all my buttons. So well written. So well described. The pace and extremity of the changes are right on. This would be an awesome script for an erotic movie with how it is so detailed. Heck as an actor, I'd play any part, but would love to play Paulie as he's living my greatest fantasy!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 4:28 PM
LOVE the feet pheromone seduction :)
Hunger
5/27/20, 4:19 PM
really fucking hot. Keep it up!
5/27/20, 3:35 PM
There will be one final part after this.
5/27/20, 2:51 PM
I went ahead and wrote a "remixed" version of this story, inserting the mind control content that I was missing. I'm just waiting for Willie Cici's permission to post it!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:38 PM
I'm not sure it was intentional on the part of the writer, but I think Carlos ended up changed as well, because the alpha all of a sudden seems to be acting like a bottom. I loved it. SAF!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:18 PM
I thought the same as Hypnothrill, but then I read the original. That's where all the mind control is. It's a sequel, of sorts. You have to read the stories together. Having said that, hot!!!!
5/27/20, 12:28 PM
*A masseuse is a female masseur
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 12:06 PM
I wish I could go under that easily even though I find speedos distracting & easy to admire.