Recent Comments

5/27/20, 4:39 AM
As Hypnothrill and Magnum said, we need details to really appreciate this story. I love a good vampire story and you have the potential but you could do a lot more with this to make it better. If Hypnothrill is giving you advice, take it and follow it. It'll help the work improve a lot. Also look at Hypnothrill's Zindar Invasion; that was a story Hypnothrill rewrote to show how to improve a story for beginning writers. Looking that and taking ideas from that and applying it to this work will make some big improvements.
May 26, 2020
5/27/20, 4:02 AM
True erotica, sparkling writing, sensuous conflict, satisfying outcomes, a rare gem of a story with true intimate entanglement. I'm ensorcelled.
May 25, 2020
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:47 AM
please write more
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:45 AM
I just imagined that many "tiny" 6'4" dudes also went through the nMIGHT process!! Looking forward to seeing the protagonist going through the process too. Hope the process looks addictive ;)
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:40 AM
it would be amazing if this story continues !!
May 26, 2020
5/27/20, 2:23 AM
Beautifully written!
5/27/20, 1:20 AM
it is a great premise. it read as a story that was stream of consciousness without any editing or spell check. but damn if I didn't picture a rubberized dick grayson. give us a description of robin and vampires in terms of face and features... go for it again..
Anonymous
5/27/20, 12:00 AM
terrific work
nycboot
5/26/20, 11:10 PM
Oh my - FANTASTIC! Really FANTASTIC!
May 26, 2020
5/26/20, 10:42 PM
Really enjoyed these detailed descriptions and the slow burn of it! I agree that it was easy to picture (not to mention pleasing to picture).