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NzDom
5/26/20, 10:15 AM
Fuck yeah ! Cumdump turned into a stud and dickhead looking up to him and lusting for him is so hot ! Wanna see Cumdump make fun of dickhead now that the tables have turned Thanks for this wonderful chapter !
Anonymous
5/26/20, 10:03 AM
So worth the long wait ! Hopefully won't have to wait long for the next chapter. Officer Cumdump being turned to a confident man is pretty hot. Wonder how he'll play on the next chapter.
May 26, 2020
Q
5/26/20, 9:52 AM
Best story I've ever read here in the 6 or so years since I've started!
5/26/20, 9:26 AM
"Retconned" the last bit of the story (Damian's portion) for an easier transition into Chapter 2. Enjoy this part and the next!
5/26/20, 8:52 AM
That is a great point, Plymouth! For me, the problem is that my stupid overthinking brain gets in the way. :p I start thinking about the actual jocks and jerks who spout this nonsense, and the consequences, and...well, before you know it, my sex drive has driven away. :p I think that is why I like more fantasy-based stories so much--in those, there's a greater removal from reality, so the thought process can be stopped. Oh, and I had to double-check--Ethan, you're the one behind the Werewolf series! No wonder! That chapter in the psychiatrist's office...brrrrrr. The thought of being tricked into changing your whole identity by someone you trusted, and being reprogrammed with hate and bigotry...it unsettles me to this day. What an excellent writer you are!
5/26/20, 8:06 AM
OH YES! now we have two alpha cop slaves to play with. I'm glad it's finally Mikey's time to shine. It seems he will have to work quite a lot
May 25, 2020
Bmax
5/26/20, 8:06 AM
nicely done. would love to read further episodes or similar stories.
5/26/20, 7:53 AM
I truly enjoy fantasies involving a daddy and his son. I enjoy the one between Phil and Roger. The inclusion of Michael adds a dimension that gives Roger another daddy. Although, at first, when Michael entered the story as a challenger for Phil's control, I thought ill of him, but further thought reminds me that he and Roger are the same. However, having addressed this, I still like the story. The key will be to get Michael under his control immediately. There can be no hesitation when Michael steps through the lakeside home's front door. I like the thought that Phil cannot say Michael's trigger, perhaps it should be Phil that, remembering what Michael has done to him, bounds Michael to Roger as a gift. A twist would be that Michael remembers what he did to Phil while being dominated. Also, Roger is in the stronger position because of the three he does not have a trigger. Which brings me to the uncle. He is SLOPPY by allowing the trigger words of two of his patients to fall into the wrong hands. As a therapist who uses hypnosis, wouldn't he have put a safeguard on his patients. Roger is a university student while his uncle is a practicing therapist.In the ensuing story will Roger discover how Michael got Phil's trigger. Also, one possibility is that Roger's uncle is not as unsuspecting or unscrupulous as we would believe. Again, thanks for the fantasy of Roger and Phil.
5/26/20, 7:33 AM
to be perfectly honest,I didn't think this story would turn me on as much as it does. the gradual change of Paul is fascinating to see. this is a great chapter
5/26/20, 7:01 AM
WOW!!!! I like that new additions, there's a lot of fun and hot stuff here. Dickhead in heat with the new confident McFaggy is a great idea. I like the new punk too, he have the right attitude to cops. The dumbing down of Humpme and Punk boy helping officer Cumdump bring the promise of lots of new humiliations. You always go beyond my expectations, dude! Thank yiu very much for the descriptions, they give a big push to the story. Every chapter is perfect, I love your work!