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5/26/20, 8:52 AM
That is a great point, Plymouth! For me, the problem is that my stupid overthinking brain gets in the way. :p I start thinking about the actual jocks and jerks who spout this nonsense, and the consequences, and...well, before you know it, my sex drive has driven away. :p I think that is why I like more fantasy-based stories so much--in those, there's a greater removal from reality, so the thought process can be stopped. Oh, and I had to double-check--Ethan, you're the one behind the Werewolf series! No wonder! That chapter in the psychiatrist's office...brrrrrr. The thought of being tricked into changing your whole identity by someone you trusted, and being reprogrammed with hate and bigotry...it unsettles me to this day. What an excellent writer you are!
5/26/20, 8:06 AM
OH YES! now we have two alpha cop slaves to play with. I'm glad it's finally Mikey's time to shine. It seems he will have to work quite a lot
May 25, 2020
Bmax
5/26/20, 8:06 AM
nicely done. would love to read further episodes or similar stories.
5/26/20, 7:53 AM
I truly enjoy fantasies involving a daddy and his son. I enjoy the one between Phil and Roger. The inclusion of Michael adds a dimension that gives Roger another daddy. Although, at first, when Michael entered the story as a challenger for Phil's control, I thought ill of him, but further thought reminds me that he and Roger are the same. However, having addressed this, I still like the story. The key will be to get Michael under his control immediately. There can be no hesitation when Michael steps through the lakeside home's front door. I like the thought that Phil cannot say Michael's trigger, perhaps it should be Phil that, remembering what Michael has done to him, bounds Michael to Roger as a gift. A twist would be that Michael remembers what he did to Phil while being dominated. Also, Roger is in the stronger position because of the three he does not have a trigger. Which brings me to the uncle. He is SLOPPY by allowing the trigger words of two of his patients to fall into the wrong hands. As a therapist who uses hypnosis, wouldn't he have put a safeguard on his patients. Roger is a university student while his uncle is a practicing therapist.In the ensuing story will Roger discover how Michael got Phil's trigger. Also, one possibility is that Roger's uncle is not as unsuspecting or unscrupulous as we would believe. Again, thanks for the fantasy of Roger and Phil.
5/26/20, 7:33 AM
to be perfectly honest,I didn't think this story would turn me on as much as it does. the gradual change of Paul is fascinating to see. this is a great chapter
5/26/20, 7:01 AM
WOW!!!! I like that new additions, there's a lot of fun and hot stuff here. Dickhead in heat with the new confident McFaggy is a great idea. I like the new punk too, he have the right attitude to cops. The dumbing down of Humpme and Punk boy helping officer Cumdump bring the promise of lots of new humiliations. You always go beyond my expectations, dude! Thank yiu very much for the descriptions, they give a big push to the story. Every chapter is perfect, I love your work!
5/26/20, 6:40 AM
Hi JoSmith, a new fan here. I just finished reading all the chapters for this series and let me just say, I'm on board. The new development with this Michael character was actually a clever idea that keeps the story fresh and adds a bit more conflict to the story. I saw that there are a lot of fans who are into the "moving away to Europe" idea as an ending to the story, but I find that too extreme for Roger's character and its too neat and tidy of an ending that it doesn't feel satisfying or plausible, What I suggest is that Roger keeps having his relationship with Stacy on the side while he takes every opportunity possible to sneak around with her dad, screwing each other senseless while she sleeps during a sleepover or something? Or maybe, when he finds out Michael's trigger phrase, Roger would venture off to their office and take advantage of them at their workplace. I'm a sucker for men in suits (not sure if you are) but maybe they can have some office roleplaying in there as well. Its a really good series so far, and I hope my suggestions can help make it better!
Unicorn
5/26/20, 6:00 AM
This is just simply amazing!
May 25, 2020
5/26/20, 5:52 AM
Love Mystic Master. I hope you will write more chapters.
5/26/20, 3:21 AM
Ok, Baphomet's second time up at bat. Can the rookie drive this next one out of the park? I mean, what are the chances that the kid is that good? Looks like we might have a "natural" here!