to be perfectly honest,I didn't think this story would turn me on as much as it does. the gradual change of Paul is fascinating to see. this is a great chapter

WOW!!!! I like that new additions, there's a lot of fun and hot stuff here. Dickhead in heat with the new confident McFaggy is a great idea. I like the new punk too, he have the right attitude to cops. The dumbing down of Humpme and Punk boy helping officer Cumdump bring the promise of lots of new humiliations. You always go beyond my expectations, dude! Thank yiu very much for the descriptions, they give a big push to the story. Every chapter is perfect, I love your work!

Hi JoSmith, a new fan here. I just finished reading all the chapters for this series and let me just say, I'm on board. The new development with this Michael character was actually a clever idea that keeps the story fresh and adds a bit more conflict to the story. I saw that there are a lot of fans who are into the "moving away to Europe" idea as an ending to the story, but I find that too extreme for Roger's character and its too neat and tidy of an ending that it doesn't feel satisfying or plausible, What I suggest is that Roger keeps having his relationship with Stacy on the side while he takes every opportunity possible to sneak around with her dad, screwing each other senseless while she sleeps during a sleepover or something? Or maybe, when he finds out Michael's trigger phrase, Roger would venture off to their office and take advantage of them at their workplace. I'm a sucker for men in suits (not sure if you are) but maybe they can have some office roleplaying in there as well. Its a really good series so far, and I hope my suggestions can help make it better!

This is just simply amazing!

Love Mystic Master. I hope you will write more chapters.

Ok, Baphomet's second time up at bat. Can the rookie drive this next one out of the park? I mean, what are the chances that the kid is that good? Looks like we might have a "natural" here!

good writing and plot development can't wait to see what you have in store and how you wrap it all up. once again this is so good that if you published it as an ebook I would buy it.

Ironically, I had thought to suggest that Roger finds another of his uncle's clients and gets the trigger for that guy too, but I didn't include it in my suggestions since I couldn't think of any scenarios that weren't contrived. Seems you found one I hadn't thought of, so well done! Rather happy to see with what we've got going forward here. Michael looks like he's going to be a fun one to play around with, if only so that Roger can do some less pleasant stuff that the audience may like without it negatively affecting Phil. Stuff like making Roger into a man-dog who keeps licking at Phil's groin/ass, or constantly edging without being able to cum... or even just completely forgetting himself and turning into a butler for the duo. Turnabout is fair play after all, what with Michael being a bit of a fucker to Phil (that is, making Phil do the actions without giving him any incentives to enjoy it). I rather like the subtle line between Roger and Michael there, given both of them are taking advantage of Phil's trigger to get him to do things he otherwise wouldn't enjoy doing. However, as Phil himself put it, Michael annoys Phil while Roger made Phil feel wanted. Definitely going to be interesting to see what Roger does with those new triggers, though, and how it might affect the relationship with the wife and Stacy now that it seems they're going to be gone for a bit longer... I also rather liked how Roger considered talking to his uncle, but immediately disregarded the idea based on a bit of paranoia but some good logic. Roger has a good head on his shoulders. That said, I'm a little surprised that Roger's uncle is aware of Roger's bisexuality, since my impression was that Roger hadn't had a lot of experience with the male end of the spectrum to really be sure. Then again, he may have confided in his uncle at some point and was given some comforting advise or something, so it still checks out and gives a bit of a dynamic for Roger and his family. One idea for getting the trigger for Michael is to have Phil remember any phrases or words that Michael instructed Phil to never say or think of saying. After all, if Michael found out about Phil's trigger, he may have discovered his own. tldr: very much worth the wait, certainly not ruined at all.

Hi! I really like it! Maybe others are not that much into humiliation, but I love it. As the character of Madelieine said in 'Quills': "It's a fiction, not a moral treatise." There's another line about things that belong on paper that I'd like to quote, but I don't want to sound agressive to others. The point is, I don't see the problem with the bullies winning in a fiction work. It's all about erotic stories with dominion on it, so it work very well for most of us. The most appealing thing to me is the lost of self-respect and the respect of others, I like how Taron is turned on with the mocks of his students, it's a great description.

Very hot story! Good job, it's one of your hottest stories. I like how you describe the debasing of all the characters and the comparison of how they used to be respected. The only thing that disappoint me is that, unlike the rest of characters, Leo was not renamed in the end. Why was that? would had been fun to see Leo being renamed with something sexual or debasing, like Lewd, or Lump, or something by the way. Also, I would have liked if you told how he see himself in his new mindset. But out of that, it's a very hot story.