Recent Comments

Nov 26, 2019
5/25/20, 7:48 PM
loved it!
Feb 9, 2020
Whatalooker
5/25/20, 7:42 PM
I, too, enjoyed the story. Please do write a part two.
5/25/20, 7:10 PM
hot
5/25/20, 6:53 PM
amazing, really missed this story. cant wait to see more
5/25/20, 6:42 PM
amazing!!! waited too long for this chapter but super happy with it! well worth the wait!!!
5/25/20, 5:46 PM
great story.... love the gradual rewrite of his history, and creation of issues and problems. i hope there is enough left of his memory to realize whats been done to him!
Deekay
5/25/20, 5:35 PM
great chapter, good pacing. but may i suggest that Roger makes phil acts and dress more like his girlfriend and take control over michael too. keep up the good work man.
Bimarguy
5/25/20, 5:22 PM
good story Willie , any chance a coworker/friend snoops around to see what happened to Jason
swngbthways
5/25/20, 5:00 PM
This is not the first series you've written that I READ and FOLLOWED. I love your knack for infusing HUMANITY to your writing and your characters. I feel what they're feeling instead of me being just an audience. Great Job! You got a fan here.
5/25/20, 4:39 PM
hmm,, i still wonder why Dave being jerk with another nerd. i thought that he is a good jock 🙄